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Title: The United Jersey Emirates
Post by: Nexis4Jersey on December 30, 2007, 02:45:05 PM
My MD is about my region called The United Jersey Emirates.   I basically used the fairview region provided by the game and turned it into  great country.   i Don't have an region picture yet but i will get one soon.   my region census broke the other day.   well heres the first city!!

Camden Inlet
R: 0
C: 70,500
I: 0
History:
Camden Inlet was settled in 1785 by duke of york who claimed the land as his empire's.  the Duke of york rained torror on the indians and Pilgrims.   By 1902 the indians and pilgrims sent a letter to the little but powerful island nation of Jersey.   The letter said,"Help us please king scott, we want to rebel against the duke of york ,we need fire power".  King Scott replied with this answer, "the Naval will be there in a week my army with be there in 2 weeks.   King scott decleared war on the York Republic on May 9, 1903.  canons , bombs and machine guns were all used in the attack.  by 1908 the duke of york gave up and retreated.   King Scott took over camden Inlet and the surrounding area, which we now call The United Jersey Emirates.    In 1945 Camden inlet's first skyscraper was built the Douglas Walker Skyscraper was 990 feet tall and set the stage for other skyscrapers to be built.  by 2000 9 skyscrapers had been built in Camden inlet.  In 2003 the goverment had built 3 bridges to bridge the gap across Camden Inlet.   The bridges dropped a once two and a half hour drive around the inlet.

Well heres my city camden Inlet.


http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/8238/camdeninletmar130011990lh0.jpg (http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/8238/camdeninletmar130011990lh0.jpg)

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5625/camdeninletmar130011990qu4.jpg (http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5625/camdeninletmar130011990qu4.jpg)

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4343/camdeninletmar130011990ua4.jpg (http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4343/camdeninletmar130011990ua4.jpg)

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/9714/camdeninletmar130011990hw7.jpg (http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/9714/camdeninletmar130011990hw7.jpg)

Title: Re: The United Jersey Emirates
Post by: TopCliff on December 30, 2007, 03:53:28 PM
Looks like a good start. Nice use of the Tsing Ma Bridge there, and your taste in BATs is excellent. My only suggestion is to not use small tiles, and possibly some seawalls and the NAM. Good start, it can only improve from here on out. Later.
Title: Re: The United Jersey Emirates
Post by: Pat Riot on December 31, 2007, 05:20:18 PM
Its first skyscraper was 990 ft?!

im sorry, but this is a little too unrealistic for my tastes. The development area aint that bad though.
Title: Re: The United Jersey Emirates
Post by: Nexis4Jersey on December 31, 2007, 05:42:38 PM
TopCliff:  Thankyou for the comment, i will take that into consideration.

Heres my next city Golden Township.

Golden Township

R: 30,500
C: 40,000
I: 0

Most of the 30,000 people work in the Blue coast another city, that will be featured in this MD.

History:

The city was founded in 1909 as the expansion of Democracy throughout the region spread thanks to King Scott.   The Township of Rainyton was the orginal name, but in 1956 it was changed to Golden Township due to public opinion vote.   Golden Township is split in two by Emirate Railway a Freight rail line that winds its way from the Blue coast all the way North to Green Harbor.  The railway built the rail line in a 30 foot deep trenched, that trench cut off the residences of the neighboorhood East Golden from the rest of the Jersey Emirates.  In'till 1989 when goverment built a superhighway across the railway.  soon after that the population spiked from 10,000 to 30,000.   The downtown quickly grew to from 5 small buildings to 10 buildings.  Today East Golden is lined with tall apartment complex's and condos   


Future:

Golden Township is planning to build a new subway and monorail that will circle and connect the rest of the city.   Also a new underground motorway is planned North to South.

Here are the Pictures!!


http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/6503/goldentownshipjul140311ps4.jpg (http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/6503/goldentownshipjul140311ps4.jpg)

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/4008/goldentownshipmay903119ee7.jpg (http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/4008/goldentownshipmay903119ee7.jpg)

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/9232/goldentownshipmay150211cw2.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/9232/goldentownshipmay150211cw2.jpg)

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/5543/goldentownshipnov260211tx1.jpg (http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/5543/goldentownshipnov260211tx1.jpg)

Coming up Next...............Maybe The United Jersey Emirates International Airport or The Blue Coast!
Title: Re: The United Jersey Emirates
Post by: TopCliff on December 31, 2007, 05:47:25 PM
Oh, this is such a big improvement from the last update. Everything looks good, and I like how you took one BAT and used it repeatedly to make it look like a big apartment complex. My only suggestion here is to get rid of the bright green grass. Nobody's grass is that green. I do like how you made that interchange in the first picture for the two freeways. Like I said before, it can only get better from here. Later.